Edit Page
The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then publish the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision | Your text | ||
Line 90: | Line 90: | ||
== Goofs == |
== Goofs == |
||
− | * The contents of the page Kevin Sr. rips out of Matt’s book are seen in closeup both when he rips the page out to wrap his money, and when Grace later places it on her table. There is a goof in that the contents of the page come from different parts of the narrative in the two different scenes, as well as the fact that in both instances, the page relates events from “Cairo” and “The Prodigal Son Returns,” not to Kevin jumping into the spring in Jarden or passing into |
+ | * The contents of the page Kevin Sr. rips out of Matt’s book are seen in closeup both when he rips the page out to wrap his money, and when Grace later places it on her table. There is a goof in that the contents of the page come from different parts of the narrative in the two different scenes, as well as the fact that in both instances, the page relates events from “Cairo” and “The Prodigal Son Returns,” not to Kevin jumping into the spring in Jarden or passing into he land of the dead as Grace describes. |
* Grace says she was in town at the Big W when the Departure occurred on 10/15. This seems inconsistent with the 2:23pm NY time seen in “The Garveys at Their Best,” which would place the time in Silverton and Broken Hill, Australia (where this material was shot, and which seems to roughly correspond to the fictional location of Kurripa and the surrounding areas) at around 3:53am. The Big W is a department store chain which keeps regular business hours, and would not be open in the early morning. |
* Grace says she was in town at the Big W when the Departure occurred on 10/15. This seems inconsistent with the 2:23pm NY time seen in “The Garveys at Their Best,” which would place the time in Silverton and Broken Hill, Australia (where this material was shot, and which seems to roughly correspond to the fictional location of Kurripa and the surrounding areas) at around 3:53am. The Big W is a department store chain which keeps regular business hours, and would not be open in the early morning. |
||